Memento Mori

It's short and straight to the point, I like that part. It's confusing, which isn't so good. Finally, it leaves the reader wanting more, which is also a good thing. ...

My parents are 17 years apart, dude. It's not wonder I have no qualms. It all depends on their personalities. Do they mix? If they don't, forget it. But teen ...

Yeah. I mean it's her life. Let her deal with it. Why in the world should I care if she had an abortion or not? It's her decision, it's her ...

It's pretty mysterious, in its own strange sense. Of course, you could have left of on a cliff hanger, most people like it better that way. :D Yours truly, Memento ...

I was never trying to impose the moral on anyone else. I was just trying to show my side. After all, there are three sides to a story: his side, ...

I don't get the ending. I understood the story, everything but the end. Anyway, on to fixing stuff! You used the word glare way too much. It kind felt weird ...

Age is just a number. It doesn't matter if you guys are 20 years apart, as long as you get along. But that rarely ever happens, because new ideas that ...

I got it, but I don't find it funny. Don't take offense please. I'm not even sure if I got it right. >.> Yours truly, Memento Mori

Isn't shooting in the right spot the most painless way to die? Aside from drifting off in sleep, of course. Also, it should be done only, I repeat, ONLY in ...

Unnecessary? Not really, I can see why people abort. I mean, nine months? With a bump? And vomiting in the morning? Sheesh, that gives anyone the creeps. Cruel? Yes, there ...

1) After reading this, does chapter one make a little more sense?? No?? Advice? Yes, sort of. It provided a reason as to why he coincidentally bumped into her and ...

Did you mean legitimate? Anyway, I have no problems with this at all. As long as the parents can provide a good home, and don't abuse the kid, it's fine. ...

Hmm... Then you wouldn't need to get rid of zygote. So fine, a fetus is a baby. Oh and about the remark about gossip? Yeah, most girls in our school ...

Nice story, and it has an original plot too. I couldn't find any errors, so forgive me if I just overlooked them. It's executed perfectly, and I think you did ...

Yeah, but a zygote eventually turns into a baby, doesn't it? So it's a baby baby... never mind that part. Anyway, a young plant is still a plant, and a ...